Pianist Heather hasn’t had sex in some time. Mike arrives home from deployment. He too hasn’t had sex in some time. These two neighbours meet one another, initially, in the hallway, as Mike moves into the apartment his nan owns.
Heather plays her piano uninterrupted into the night. Mike calls at her apartment as he realises she hasn’t had a break. The remaining pages are of the two characters exploring each others bodies, with the piano in heavy use, as well as Heathers voice.
It works well and I like the alternating jokes and moves between the two, all while the deaf nan sleeps upstairs in her own apartment.
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